The Maiden Gets a Fairy Godmother

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The ashamed and furious maiden ran home through the woods. She snuck into her small house towards the edge of the village, and not a human soul saw her again that day.

That night, she dreamt of the past day’s experiences. The Prince chased her through the woods, his gigantic form crashing through the trees. Just as he was about to snatch her up from the forest floor, an elderly woman appeared.

The woman, wrinkled like a year old prune, raised her staff towards the Prince and turned him into a frog before squashing him with her heavy boot.

The maiden looked fearfully at the enchantress, who said, “Fear not, I am your fairy godmother!”

The maiden suddenly turned away from the woman with an annoyed look on her face.

“I thought you were sending me on a grand adventure?” she asked severely. “And now you give me an ugly fairy godmother? Who do you think you are!?”

Gah! We’re getting there! You’re worse than my listeners, whomever they are! They’ve been surprisingly quiet… Yes, I know you’re… Just… sh!

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  1. Avatar OrangeOreos (LoA)

    Woot! I’m all sequeled up.

  2. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    this sentence seems wrong: “I thought you were send me on grand adventures?”

  3. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    I really like the maiden’s interaction with the narrator. Please keep going!

  4. Avatar OrangeOreos (LoA)

    Ah, thanks Pyro. I’ll change that.

  5. Amj Lone Writer

    Guess who’s turn it is to sequel again…. :D

  6. Avatar gĀ²LaPianistaIrlandesa

    X) Poor narrator, getting a hard time from both the protagonist and the audience.

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