The change of tense is confusing to me.

The story itself is terrific!

Fixed the tense thankyou xD

1st sentence is awkward, seems to be all subject, and could be combined with second.
Present tense gives this a more dramatic feel. Your description is great! Will these two meet again?

the bloodied stiletto is ominous, but maybe she fell and it broke, and it’s her blood?? or not? okay. so maybe she shouldn’t meet the man again, even in better mental health..

Wow she really likes his eyes, doesn’t she?

Why is the stiletto heal, bloodied? Perhaps because she shoved it in the eye of the last victim of her infatuations! =[)

Nice visual Ms. Jae. I especially like the _ small sports bag warming my bare feet_ for some reason, I’m not sure why though. I guess we all have our thing. Some of us like eyes, others of us like warm sports bags.

Great little moment, full of magic and mystery. It makes me think of those foreign films that are all dark and mysterious and just a few shades off from reality and full of odd details like that bloody stilleto. The first half of that first sentence is a fragment. You could fix with a rewording or just changing that semicolon into a comma.

Edited. Thankyou