Dear Diary

Avatar Author: StudMuffin (LoA) I'm 20. I live in Hastings, UK. Uhhh I'm going to school for illustration, but sometimes I just, like, love writing. Back when I was 15, I was a member of this site in it's earliest days and I stopped using it after ... Read Bio

Dear Diary,

She spoke to me today.
As you know, we sit next to each other in Chem. I couldn’t keep my eyes off of her. For the first time, though, she was looking back at me.

The bell rings, I get up to leave and I’m stopped by a hand. The softest, warmest hand I’ve ever been touched by.

“Hey,” she says, “Michael?”

She remembers my name. Oh my God, does she remember my name.

“I was… You know, ladies choice is next week and I was wondering if you wanted to be my date?”

My heart didn’t skip a beat, diary. My heart stopped beating entirely.
I wish I could have played it cool, but I could feel my cheeks flooding red.

“Du- Yeah, of course!” I manage to sputter.

“Awesome! I’ll.. talk to you later, yeah?”

She departs, and I exhale.

I would pray to the Gods but it looks like my prayers have already been answered.

I just need to find something to wear.

12/14/11

-Micheal

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  1. Avatar Infinity.

    What I got out of this was possibly she’s out of his league and yet, she remembered his name and that’s plenty enough for him. That moment was the fact she knew who he was which he never thought would have been possible?

    Anyways, I like how this is realistic yet it’s got me thinking cute kinds of things that involve these two characters and the things that happen everyday can be so small but unbelievable.

  2. Avatar Infinity.

    Okay, and you have edited it and added more!

    even better.
    love the add with a ladies choice dance – and his reaction :)

  3. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    ha yeah sorry. I wrote it and then totally re did it haha

  4. Avatar Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

    Aww. Sweet how this is your unreal =.="

    Something undeniably cute about slice of life.

  5. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    This is the most awesome moment. :) You did a fabulous job!

  6. Avatar Brebelles {LoA}

    This is so cute! I hope you expand it, I think it’s be a cute series if you did..
    or get someone to collab with you to do her diary entry, while you do his

  7. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Had that fantasy enough times through junior high and high school. Fun and cute, and I like your take on the challenge—not fantastical but a relatable fantasy. I know it’s a ‘journal entry’, but I think it would be better if you picked one tense (past or present) and stuck with it more consistently.