SO GOOD. Can’t even describe how I feel about this because I am at a loss for words. I always like what you write but how you wrote this was fantastic! I like how the sentences are being repeated over and over and they sound insane and what they’re going through is insane and I love everything about this!!
Infinity is right, This is amazing. Definitely in your top pieces. The repetition does a lot for the emphasis and tone, and the last stanza left me breathless. This is a really great piece.
Infinity. 
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