I like it! I immediately feel something for the guy… I definitely want to know more. Like how he got there, what happened? Kudos.

Good stuff, I didn’t understand: “A beautiful woman next to me in bed. … She smiles, comes to my side of the bed.” Maybe I’m not picturing that right.

I tried to set it apart in italics but I was going for kind of a stream of conciousness, with a memory stuck in there for a little backstory.

Oh. no i meant, i wasn’t sure how she’s coming to his side of the bed… didn’t she already roll onto his side of the bed?