freefall

Avatar Author: Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA) Programmer by day, weird ideas haver by night. Official member of the League of Awesomeness. I will henceforth go by the self chosen title: The Purveyor of Pyromaniac Prowess. Long live the League! READ, REPLY, FICL... Read Bio
jumping, flying, falling, terror, smash! tomatosauce! -————
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  1. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    yet the tomato was silent as it fell..
    or is that a metaphor for the innerds..
    lol nice twist at the end

  2. Avatar jesteram

    I think you’re fudging it a bit by using tomatosauce as one word at the end there…

  3. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    i could have used ketchup!

  4. Avatar ethelthefrog

    Laugh out loud. Very nice, but I do agree with jesteram.

  5. Avatar blusparrow (LoA)

    ooooooooooo, SPLATT. I am imagining this onee commerical about this screaming poker chip looking thing. I wish it would just so splatt like on this ficlet though.

  6. Avatar Reiko516

    My first thought was, “Gross!” But very evocative and effective!

  7. Avatar monkeybomb

    I think I actually would have preferred ketchup.

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