Lost Spirits

Avatar Author: MissEve Just another writer around the corner. Read Bio

Forever wandering this vast place
Always going on a steady pace
Never rest had I
Without the tears blurring my eye

I wander everywhere I go
Never going too fast nor too slow
I have nowhere in mind
I am eternally walking blind

Sadness, depression, desperation
All these and my longing for attention
With this curse that got me impaled
Hope that I can still be saved

Ah! Wandering spirits like me!
No one seems to see
How lonely I can be

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  1. Avatar Princess Binky Lemontwist (LoA)

    Welcome to ficly! :)

    I can’t wait to read more from you. :D

  2. Avatar Robert Quick

    Welcome to Ficly!

    While each person’s journey is ultimately solitary, there are times in which we are a part of something greater than ourselves. Hopefully Ficly can help you find what you seek, whether that is solitude or something else. Happy writing! (or something)

  3. Avatar Michael Wayne LeBlanc

    The thing I like about this piece is the continuity without repetition. Too often does a poet rely one word – they fixate on it, over use it. I see none of that here.

    Great job.

  4. Avatar In Night's Arms

    I agree with Michael here. Very nice.

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