His Love

Avatar Author: Moonlightgirl i am blonde with blue eyes i love to write and i am in love with the best guy in the world i am a Ficlets Survivor and am also a member of GotPoetry where i am also known as moonlightgirl check me out there sometime too. Read Bio

shes sitting in the corner
all alone and scared
afraid for the next time
his footsteps will come near
for she knows just what he will do
what he will ask
of his little girl
for mom is passed out somewhere
unable to oblige
the needs of a husband
so his daughter must provide
at only the age of five

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  1. Avatar .:Band Baby:.

    =/ this is sad. It kind of reminds me of the book Identical by Ellen Hopkins. Ever read it? It’s a really good book!

  2. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    wow this is just savage. well written i wish i had been warned.

  3. Avatar ALRO613 (LoA)

    Sad – but powerful.
    Nothing good comes outta that.

  4. Avatar blusparrow (LoA)

    awww. im gonna use a different word besides sad. this is… depressing. very well put together in such a short poem.

  5. Avatar Moonlightgirl

    thank you everyone and BB yes i have read Identical it reminds me of that book too

  6. Avatar The Red Death

    very sad, the reality of it is scary

  7. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    this is tragic..

  8. Avatar Moonlightgirl

    thank you guys for the comments i really appreciate it

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