You Said

Avatar Author: ElshaHawk (LoA) "Read, Reply, Ficly, or Die!" -Krully Ficly Blogger-In-Chieftess I am a self-proclaimed member of the LoA (League of Awesomeness): Mistress of Well-Intentioned Indecision. Special Needs Teacher, wife, mother of ... Read Bio

You said my eyes were like diamonds;
I smelled alluring

You said my first date was also yours;
I looked ravishing

You said you’d only kissed once before;
I was your soul mate

You said you’d never look at any other;
I was all you needed

You know what?
I’m so glad you speak truthfully!

You are my best friend;
Always will be!

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  1. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Ah, I was genuinely relieved that this didn’t have a bitter, twist ending.

  2. Avatar Coccinella

    awwww. so bright and sweet! and no ifs, ands or buts. I mean its thes or ands :)

  3. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    yes i was going to mess it up with a dark twist, but I chose not to, because ficly is too full of them right now!

  4. Avatar StudMuffin (LoA)

    At the end, he should be like…..
    like a murderer or something!!
    lol jk,
    but ’tis a great story.
    Even if theres no murder…….

  5. Avatar Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

    i am with muff i was expecting murder. i guess the real twist was that it had no twist. the irony.

  6. Avatar stargazer1960

    Still trying to figure out if I was expecting a nasty accusation at the end. You got me.

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