Women about Men

Avatar Author: Marli Dare to try. I like diversity and immagination. What happens next. With a B.V.A. Degree I do not get away from paper work. I am also a Registered nurse.(General, Psychiatric,Mental Retardation and hold certificates in Im... Read Bio

Dear why don’t you shop for some shoes? When you are finished I will be at either the Games shop or the video arcade.
Why don’t you grab a girly magazine or a chic flic to watch in the other room as I want to see Sean of the Dead tonight. Are you ready? I really need to be at Nigels by midday. What ? We are going to your mothers for lunch? No you didn’t remind me before we left the house this morning otherwise why would I say yes to Nigel. What you actually said was ‘it would be nice to have lunch with mum today’ you did not specifically say that we were going to have lunch with your mum today. I rest my case. Ever since we got up this morning you have not been in a good mood. First you bite at me when I asked where the butter was. I knew it was in the frige but exactly where in the fridge, I was asking. Then I asked where my clean shirt was. How was I supposed to know you had ironed it and it was hanging in the wardrobe.You can be so awful when you get up grumpy. And another thing

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  1. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    i think you left out the pauses of no thought.. where he was driving and thinking of nothing while you were headed to the store..
    hee hee

  2. Avatar Krulltar

    Wow…and the male/female saga goes on. This is more what a woman thinks a man thinks, but it address so many conversations between a man and woman.

  3. Avatar Marli

    @Apocalypse. Its lovely that males are different than females. LOL. It would be a drab old world if they weren’t. Your story made me want to do it.It was well intentioned.

  4. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Well this goes wrong from the start with the basic assumption that men think whatsoever. When will you silly women ever learn?
    Cute stream-of-consciousness.

  5. Avatar Ridcully Calvert

    I enjoyed it, the stream-of-conciousness narrative is not normally something that I enjoy, but this one was well executed.

  6. Avatar Raegan Dauterive

    lol this reminds me of the “Husband Chairs” they have at stores like Sears or JCPenney’s, those random big comfy chairs in the shoe and women’s clothes departments that 90% of the women’s husbands sit in lol :)

    I like the stream of conciousness, I think it works well.

  7. Avatar Browncoatben

    It’s kind of like a man’s thought process. Especially the reasonable, rational bits!

    haha

  8. Avatar John Perkins

    You and I have very different definitions of “girly magazine” I think.

    It’s like a Ficly sitcom in here.

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