If dandelions had souls, this is what they would feel. my only nit pick “the force of the winds gets thicker”, there has to be a better word than thicker.. stronger?
very beautiful picture you’ve wrought. :)

oh yeah, welcome to ficly!

Thanks ElshaHawk (LoA). F=Your feed back is highly appreciated. I agree on the awkward wording. I do that a lot. Unintentionally of course, but I’m always working on kicking the habit.

Lovely imagery and a neat way of looking at the clouds and yourself.
Feedback-wise, I’d say try to find some synonyms for soul rather than use the same word so often.