The Ultimate Chronicle - Part 1

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Abe Lincoln collapsed to his knees in the soft volcanic ash. He tried to start his electric gauntlets, but the heavy brass weapons on his hands only fizzled. The time-space generator he wore on his back coughed and spluttered, exhausted. All seemed lost. Nearby, Nikola Tesla’s hulking steel robot body, the Autoviathon, lay in wrecked pieces. The broken engines wheezed, struggling to supply oxygen and blood to the tank that held the genius inventor’s severed head.

Dressed in the flowing black robes of the Esoteric Order of Mars, Rasputin towered over Lincoln, pointing the Staff of Ra at him.

“For four score and seven eons, I have fought you and your diabolical master, Mecha-Hitler,” said Lincoln, his powerful voice uncowed. He picked up his dusty stovepipe hat and set it on his head. “Do you expect me to stop even as Vesuvius erupts?”

“Nyet, Mister Lincoln,” lisped Rasputin, a grin spreading beneath his long beard, “I expect you to die.”

But just as the blast of ancient energy prepared to discharge…

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  1. Avatar Abstract Rorschach

    I have got to have MOAR ULTIMATE!

  2. Avatar cthulhuburger

    I dig it. Sequeled!

  3. Avatar Anonymuncule

    Awesome, sir.

  4. Avatar bluefish

    Thanks, guys!

  5. Avatar bluefish

    I must admit, the idea for Space/Time Lincoln came from http://studiocreations.deviantart.com/art/Steampunk-Abe-Lincoln-Costume-97579453

  6. Avatar StudioCreations

    I am truely humbled to have created an image and costume that inspired this story. Thank you so much for creating this tall yarn of prose and posting it to the net for everyone to enjoy. Props need to go out to herrenmedia.deviantart.com also, he drew the original illustration of Steampunk Lincoln that inspired me to make the costume.

  7. Ahfl_icon THX 0477

    Bizarre and odd with a perfect job at giving a glimpse, albeit a small one, into a very large story-verse.

  8. Avatar Anonymuncule

    Yall should check out this:
    http://fictiongen.boxofjunk.ws/
    Very fun. Steam punk madness.

  9. Avatar bluefish

    You’re always more than welcome to come contribute to this steampunk madness, Mr. Hillbilly. :)

  10. Avatar bluefish

    Oh, and StudioCreations, I am amazed and a little giddy that you approve. Thanks for the inspiration! :D Space/Time Lincoln could never have happened without you.

  11. Avatar Pyropunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    StudioCreations you did the original drawing justice. I love steampunk stuff.