Duuuude, that was awesome! Flows really well.

The only thing that sounds awkward is the “and trips, He tripped” part.

Thanks, liar. =P

It was for English last year.

I am not lying!

I wish our English teachers let us write cool stuff like this… instead it’s all stupid essays and other dumb things.

It just had to be a 32-line poem. I think I got a high-B to a low-A.

Deserved an A plus.