Well, I must say I giggled at Dominic’s creative method, and I loved the reparte’ between him and Amy. A couple of little corrections, though: “Normaly” should be “normally,” and you should’ve written “The_n_ he had an idea” (but that was probably just a typo). Other than those two little things, I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for entering! =))
Hmm…I think he cheated. Theoretically, he burned the door down, he didn’t open it. :o) But I’m being nit-picky. It certainly was a dramatic way to get the door open and as J.A. mentioned, I love the dialog between the two. This was fun! Thanks for sharing.
J. A. Keane
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