I like it. Situational irony is funny, and this is pretty well done.
Funny. And only a little sad. Small note: “he himself” could probably just be “himself” to smooth out the line. The word “Well,” also stuck out to me as a bit unnatural, but those are just minor nitpicks in a clever story. Good work, once again.
Funny. And only a little sad.
Small note: “he himself” could probably just be “himself” to smooth out the line. The word “Well,” also stuck out to me as a bit unnatural, but those are just minor nitpicks in a clever story. Good work, once again.
Sam Ervin
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