Ouch, that was painful. Feels allegorical, though I’m not sure for what. The ‘left, right, left’ stuff had me thinking military, but your meaning remains elusive. Great, albeit horrific, visual as well.

I toyed with so many closing lines that I went cross-eyed.

So I just left it as is. I’m not sure I really sold what that left right biz was with your comment.

Thanks THX!

I like the contrast at the beginning very much. The action that followed was so jarring! The horror and pain with the unfinished feeling at the end feels kind of appropriate, as if the protagonist just still can’t snap out of it every time he tells it.

This was amazing. Brutal and beautiful. The timing was perfect and it’s just heartbreaking. I do not have enough pencils.

It fades out wonderfully. The ‘left… right..’ motif almost like a clock that is taunting the hero with his lateness.

Strongly reminiscent of the ending of Brave New World. Brutal, indeed, it leaves me sitting uncomfortably in my seat. Something of a talent you have.

Impressive.