Comments on This Doesn't Mean YOU, No Way (no repetition challenge) by ElshaHawk (LoA)

ElshaHawk (LoA)

This is purely in sarcastic fun.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Spageti

Repetition.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 1 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

no way, i checked and triple checked. guess i have to check again.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Akheloios

Only two words though.

http://labnol.blogspot.com/2007/02/analyze-your-text-writing-for-word.html

Knew there’d be something out there for this. When in doubt, cheat.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

ha!
now it’s not repetitive!
I got this challenge.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

oh my god i dont know what is worse, Elsha’s laziness personified or the return of spegetti. but nice piece elsha
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

oh my god i dont know what is worse, Elsha’s laziness personified or the return of spegetti. but nice piece elsha
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Akheloios

Huzza!

Good work btw.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

yeah, good effort, but it is terrible as a piece.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
stargazer1960

Not terrible! It is a really fun read, and political to boot.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
THX 0477

Yep, not a story, but still funny, and amusing to go through and look for repetition. I find it extra funny that Mighty-Joe’s comment is repeated.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

LIKE! Even though I myself am a culprit of overdoing the language sometimes, dragging out my thesaurus. It’s not terrible though. I like the punctuation. Gives a proper tone to the piece, light and cheery despite the nature of the content.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
Spageti

Buahaha! Spageti is eternal.
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 1 out of 5
Jae

Nice voice in this one! Your questioning technique made the process easier, perchance?
- Posted almost 9 years ago.
- 3 out of 5