This is one of those Ficly stories I wish didn’t exist because I now want to read the full story, 14 novels and a movie tie in, and unless this is your synopsis, I’m going to have to wait at least a couple of weeks for you to write them :3

I really liked the start of the 4th paragraph, the blood and tears spent in sacrifice.

Thanks Akheloios! I did brush it up a bit more but felt I succeeded at the challenge of a possitive ending. I do plan on writing a book with some of these story elements but haven’t started it as of yet. Still in the research stage. Reading Parallel Worlds by Prof. Kaku, great read. I could start with some ficly installments to get me going.

Great imagery (isn’t that what you just said on mine?? ha)! I’d like to hear about her adventures as well. This almost feels out of body, or huge and metaphorical, like she is a planet all her own.

Thanks Elsha, I do love imagery along with the action. If I do write this character I hope she is epic and a heavenly body. Love is ever metaphorical to me so that fits. I hope to end all my stories with a kiss. SMOOCH!

A goddess in 1024 characters. Very well done. I’m tempted to sequel.

zxvasdf , Prequel or sequel away!

Oh my. Simply wonderful.
Expressive and full of image served with a slice of hope.
This was so beautifully written and in only 1024…. amazing.

Thanks JC Tovil and all the other great comments. I may have to expand on this story someday…so until then. Happy space travels.

Beautiful prose here. Very fluid. This is the kind of story that strikes me as being written last line first, and everything else leading up to it being fit to it.

Thanks Jim for the lovely comment!
I’ve never started with the last line first and written towards it. Do people actually do that? Sounds difficult.