Comments on Sometimes, it can be fun! by Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

I’m not sure if it’s all that good. I guess that’s up for everyone else to decide. But I will say I enjoyed creating it…

Submitted as an entry for the “A Legend in My Own Mind” competition.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

i liked it and welcome to ficly
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Thank you! I’m starting to get the hang of this beautifully restricted art form.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
StudMuffin (LoA)

Oh, btw.
I read the status and my first thought was, “That’s what she said.”
Nice story, though.
Oh, and welcome to Ficly!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

“I just don’t feel this is going to work out, you know, in the long run.”

“THAT’S WHAT SHE SAID!!! HAHAHA!!!”

“Yeah, actually… It is.”
- Posted over 10 years ago.
StudMuffin (LoA)

hahaha
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
♦ Jenunique ♦

Thanks for taking the challenge! I am going to refrain from posting comments until the end date. (Just to be fair and all, can’t help it— I’m a Libra. ;) )
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ElshaHawk (LoA)

i worked with schizos before.. i never had one who thought the cockroaches talked, but what a great thing if he ever “heard” the cockroach turn on him.. he’d be a cockroach killing machine!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

I took liberties with the effects of schizophrenia. Thought it might make for an interesting point of view, though. Hope it was worth it!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
K-Jellybean

Whoa, yes, this is love, i love this. yes.

Ok, sorry I had a brain explosion. This is a wonderfully done piece with a perfectly insane narration. It’s unsettling, morbid and a bit frightening. So perfect.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Eloquent Mess {(LoA)}

Wow… the first ficly I wrote won a contest?

I thought it was crap. Guess you guys showed me…
- Posted over 10 years ago.