Baby this amazing, you really rock. Frank sinatra never knew he was able to walk on water because the holy spirit that held him up was a lonely white boy playing third chair trumpet.
Hi Not You! Way to post! You go girl! I felt like I was in a dark, neon lit, blues club.. the only place i’ve heard real jazz was at some super ritzy wedding reception.. And there wasn’t enough chairs for you to have been there.. ;)
oh thank you stargazer that makes me feel good after harry hood said the popular list was trash and the people who like it were idiots. http://ficly.com/stories/6462 Go read Harry hoods comment and you will understand why i am so put out this morning. But thank you stargazer this was my first ficlet, i love your pic.
You have a pure, startling, original, sexy voice… I’ve been back to reread this gorgeous thing about ten times before even being brave enough to know what to say. If the fast featuring of this piece proves anything, it proves that shit-hot stuff does get noticed quickly. I love it.
Beautiful. Gorgeous. Very original, imagistic. Do not let anyone discourage you, no matter how rude profane or jealous they may be. Let it be their problem, not yours. Keep on rocking and writing!
I’m especially fond of the second half of the poem. While reading it, I actually heard some jazz music as back-up. Nothing special, just a little beat every now & again – sad yet sassy.
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