giberish? almost worked. i like your style. give me more.

Baby this amazing, you really rock.
Frank sinatra never knew he was able to walk on water because the holy spirit that held him up was a lonely white boy playing third chair trumpet.

hey band this is jesi’s first post

That was sexy as hell, amazing work. I used to play trumpet, love this.

GIVE HER PENCILS, I SAY! FIVE GAZILLION SHOULD DO!

thanks mess that makes me feel good……hey you wanna webcam??? just wonderin.
lol

Hahaha! Anytime, your call.

Hi Not You!
Way to post! You go girl!
I felt like I was in a dark, neon lit, blues club.. the only place i’ve heard real jazz was at some super ritzy wedding reception.. And there wasn’t enough chairs for you to have been there.. ;)

awe congrats on your first post! i liked this, it was nice.

(i’m not giviing pencils because I don’t want it to hint at the winner’s) sorry.

i totally forgot to say… Thanks for entering!!

baby this so good you suck

hey band i wasnt talking tyo you i was talking to MY BABY

LOL

I AM LOL-ING RIGHT NOW

hell Sam you are really cute without the red eyes

MJY, why did you say you weren’t talking to me? i knew you weren’t and none of my comments were directed towards you until this one??

That. Was. Awesome! You’ve really got a feel for writing. I look forward to seeing more from you!

Oh, and grats on the feature!

thanks TP thats funny i said TP

Congrats on being featured!

^{I told you your poetry was kickass.}

hey how did you make that text smaller?
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Very nice Not You, nice to see you writing!

I like your structure and the imagery is very well executed.

oh thank you stargazer that makes me feel good after harry hood said the popular list was trash and the people who like it were idiots. http://ficly.com/stories/6462
Go read Harry hoods comment and you will understand why i am so put out this morning.
But thank you stargazer this was my first ficlet, i love your pic.

Yeah, Harry Hood definitely needs to learn some manners.

He may not like what’s written on this site, and that’s fine. His prerogative. Tastes vary. But a little decency goes a long way.

You CAN tell someone you think there’s something you don’t like about their story without being rude about it!

You have a pure, startling, original, sexy voice… I’ve been back to reread this gorgeous thing about ten times before even being brave enough to know what to say. If the fast featuring of this piece proves anything, it proves that shit-hot stuff does get noticed quickly. I love it.

Beautiful. Gorgeous. Very original, imagistic. Do not let anyone discourage you, no matter how rude profane or jealous they may be. Let it be their problem, not yours. Keep on rocking and writing!

In one word, swanky

Hotness! so glad to see you posting! When did MJ kidnap that kid? Seems like I’ve seen him somewhere before…

lol

ya.. this was very… V.E.R.Y GOOD!

Beautiful, I love this!

This is amazing. The meter in it is just fantastic and it begs to be read aloud — the mark of great poetry.

I’m especially fond of the second half of the poem. While reading it, I actually heard some jazz music as back-up. Nothing special, just a little beat every now & again – sad yet sassy.

this is great! i just realized that i’ve never read any of your work…
i’m the 6th chair…. x.x

she said this poem was her self portrait.

nice self-protrait was nominated for teh ficly book. I think i may cry now..

there’s someting to be said
when someone beautiful leaves the room.

truer words have never been spoken….