o don’t mind it at all! and how did you get that sweet line in the middle of your ficlet?!!!!!!!!!!

I like the progression, the one word leads, followed by a description. It’s a different kind of free form, unique and adds emphasis.. which let’s face it, in high school, everything is worse!

Glad you liked it.

Also, for the horizontal rule (that sweet line in the middle of my ficlet) use 3 asterisks *

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very nice. I like the description and the word paired together! thanks for entering!