I really like this. Its very true as well. I like how you put in some subtle humor, but had a serious point at the end.

Thanks!

I’m not particularly religious myself, but it was fun writing this.

hey ervin i always thought you were kind of cheesie, with your over the top red eyes.
I need to apologize because this poem has so many awesome lines i cant even begin to say.You can even make your own
There’s always something to love
Your religion could outlaw groans
Or believe the earth came from a glove
this line elevated you from cheesie to mochismo it is just truth meets gangsta meets Ban Ku
You rock you are an awesome poet.
they need more pencils for this.

i need to say one more time how much i like this

Cheesy? Hm… actually this used to be the most recent picture of me on my computer. I should really get around to changing it…

but thanks, MJY!

there are a lot of things to worship…

Nothing else to say except…I love it!

it sounded like you had fun writing this. FOUR STARS! umm… pencils?