Solomon Grundy say poem good…Superman bad.
solomon grundy say 27 pencils

Oh, Joe, you’re wonderful.

I say White, Vast, and Clean.
But I also say you’re cheating at ficly by writing such short pieces. Not that they aren’t like haikus and powerful, just, FOUR WORDS?! That’s pushing some kind of limit.. and I KNOW you can write something even more astounding about purity using more words. ;)

Do more words sully the purity?

Yes. ;-)

Read: True Confession.

An addition to the “poem” at the end of the piece.

I love it. Pure and simple, I love it. :-D

ok if more words sully the purity, then insert things like tilde ~ or hyphen – or vertical line thingy | .

You could [squarebracket] for exposition and {curvey bracket for empahsis}

You have a whole keyboard, e*x*p*r*e*s*s away!!!!

Adding unnecessary verbiage or punctuation sullies the poem.

;-)

Solom0n Grundy Say This is crazy poem.

Solomon Grundy say needs more beef.

so close! lol I kinda wanna do that now, but maybe I should wait till next semester =)