I found this oddly humorous, I don’t know if it was meant that way, but I like it :)

five pencils :)

You know, I didn’t authorize you to write this biography of me.

But I guess I will let it pass this time.

Why didn’t my pencils stick to my comments? Ah well try again.

hm i think this genius has it all figured out.

I did the same thing.

Oh, this is your biography, Radical? I thought it was mine. (Except I go to a university, which is technically not a college, however…)

Oh, and terriblebeauty, you are a genius. I can see it in your writing.

The idea of the poem is good, but I think the word construction is really clunky. I think if you played with it a little more, cleaned it up, sharpened it, it could be a lot stronger. And the last line is… well, one thing at a time.

Actually, Twyst, when I wrote this it was not intended to be a poem. But to each his own.

And thanks, Rorschach. :)

Without meaning to sound too analytical here, I really liked how the simplicity of the storytelling, almost childrens picturebook-ish, contrasted with the fact that it’s about a genius!

Really nice – and I like the last line – to me it almost apologises, and explains the basic structure of his story. MH