i love how marli just snatches me away for a cuppa.. well i imagine a cuppa.. :) where did joe and alex go? ;) prolly to the kitchen too.

I like your sequel waaay better than mine.

This is very… real, if that makes sense.

i still like sam’s extra bounty hunter scheme, like the threat is a lot bigger than we realize..

I’m sorry, I didn’t keep track of where Joe and Alex went. I was paying too much attention to the fridge.

hehehehe paying the fridge is funny

Oh dear Mess .you have certainly got the Brits and Aussies mixed up. roflol. I am going to give you the nobel(not the NOBEL)prize for a new language and perhaps ficly can come up with a name.
i.e. pomoz .(pom being a gentle name the diggers gave to the brits)

i want to see a sequel, but would half to brush up on my aussie accent, come up with more dilemma, more threat, and up the action.. so if anyone else wants to jump in, maybe take this in another POV, go right ahead. besides I fully intended for other ficliers to be in the hideout with Marli.

Marli, I’d be happy to correct my language, if you’ll give me a suitable replacement. Sadly, we Americans are completely oblivious to the nuances of Brit vs Aussie speech patterns.

Oh mess it really was a hoot reading this and i enjoyed it immensely. I would have the same problem with dialogue of all other countries as well . It was just so very funny to see the take on Aussie speech. Its interesting in a way how other people perceive you.

Oh, I know… I’m from Texas, and everyone thinks it’s all “Howdy pardner, yee-haw git ‘um ro-de-yo hyaah! Let’s drive our ol’ truck to the water-well out yonder and have ourselves a little ho-down! There’s a snake in mah boot!”

I’m nothing like that. lol

I like that we’re getting some characteristics for the friends beyond just that they are friends. That accent seemed over the top to me as well. Nice job setting up the next step in the story.