AAAA RRRRRRRGHwas THE reply. or HER reply. Otherwise a good plot and a twist at the end…very nice.

twins that fast? wow, go momma! he’s smiling until he has to clean the car, or gets the detailing bill. O.o

His, He, We, Her, the driver, the man. I realize that the story has a frenetic pace to it. However, there are so many pronouns that I had to read it twice to figure out what was going on. Names might help with clarification.
Just a suggestion.

I edited it to be “the” reply and I added a name for the husband/father, I think it helps… thanks for the feedback, you three! I appreciate it.

Love the way you interpreted the challenge — very well done.

the last sentence does not make sense to me. good pace.

Funny little bit of adventure and drama. Maybe not entirely realistic, but it worked nicely for the challenge.

Feh, realism.