You paint a very detailed, vivid scene here, with some deeper meaning at the end. A it different – I like it :) Particularly impressed by the ‘multiple meaning’ title which doesn’t seem pretentious at all having read the fic… Brava! MH :)

You paint a very detailed, vivid scene here, with some deeper meaning at the end. A it different – I like it :) Particularly impressed by the ‘multiple meaning’ title which doesn’t seem pretentious at all having read the fic… Brava! MH :)

Thank god for the random story button, not letting this wonderful piece go unnoticed for the most part. Very much reflexive about how I felt at the start of this year, and end of last——I hate funerals. Hate them. I went to four over the course of six months. This is how I ended up feeling.

5 pencils for capturing the feel of a teenager at a funeral.[at least, that’s how I took it.]