That penultimate paragraph totally makes it – the reasoning of someone who’s clearly used to this level of devestation…

I can’t decide whether the word ‘WHOOOOOSH’ is good or not. On the one hand, it’s certainly not as elegant as the rest of the piece, but then, I suppose bomber planes are essentially vulgar creations, and this big, capitalised word with an inordinate amount of ’O’s’ is showing that…

Your call I suppose :) Anyway, good work and welcome… Back? MH :)

Some would say “too quiet”, but she didn’t go in for that kind of cliche.

Favorite Line. :) Nice piece.

Nice telling of the end of the world from the point of view of someone going for a peaceful way out, not a panicked one. Neat little bit of story.