oh no! he set her up!
hey, who stole the story?! i like the flash back method, but here it leaves room for so much more..
Really great idea, but you might have finessed the ending a little more. It seems a little jarring to go from the flashback instantly to the future and reveal it all in once sentence. Other than that, nice set up.
Really great idea, but you might have finessed the ending a little more. It seems a little jarring to go from the flashback instantly to the future and reveal it all in once sentence.
Other than that, nice set up.
Elsha: What do you mean by stole the story? o.o Chad: Thanks, but I kind of wanted the end to be sharp and jarring. :]
Elsha: What do you mean by stole the story? o.o
Chad: Thanks, but I kind of wanted the end to be sharp and jarring. :]
D.S. Aly 
ElshaHawk (LoA) 
Chad Wright 
Ampersand