This…wow. It hurt to read it (that’s a compliment). I really don’t have any right words to say other than that.

That there really are such horrendous, twisted, evil men such as this makes it all the more harrowing. I think Ficly should be used to look at tough issues such as this, and you’ve handled it with due sensitivity…

Strong characterisation and description, with a stomach churningly foreboding ending. MH.

Wow, this was awesome.

The descriptions are very good.

Am wanting to read on right now and find out what happens to the poor girl, but my colleges computer is blocking it so I’ll have to wait till I get home! Well done in capturing her emotions.