My only criticism is the name Quart Towers, because at first, I thought you meant milk quarts and this was a play place in the backyard built of cardboard containers! If you have control over that name, plz change it. If that is a place in Valencia, well, it was just a hilarious misinterpretation.
The river scene and the rebellious teen are great images. :)

I wish I could follow my inspiration like this. I liked this.

Wow! When were you in Valencia?

I ask, cuz of your comment being from your point of view, and cuz now-a-day the river no longer has water. It was diverted a while ago because of a terrible flood, and now hosts the coolest gardens and architectural sites.

But totally know what you mean by the feeling of being in Valencia!!!

A really vivid picture you’ve painted here – great imagery and a brilliant Romantic author kind of characterisation for Drew, you make him sound like a 21st Century Byron!

Lovely entry – MH :)

Byron = Awesome. Thanks x

I think I might have to steal that Byron characterisation. I have whole new story ideas about eloquent, puffy-shirted writers floating through my head now.

Yayy Make it a sequel!

i wouldn’t call myself an eloquent, puffy-shirted writer. :)