I really like the creative descriptions in this piece. The way you’ve written it makes it all the more interesting to read. Very original (:

I think you have captured the challenge superbly :D Very original, but I’m not sure if your were going for poem/limerick, because you have the rhyme, but the syllables is all over the place.

I like this. I found it very whimsical and descriptive. It allowed me to almost feel as if I were dancing with her. Nice job with that. Is this a narrative poem?

I like this. I found it very whimsical and descriptive. It allowed me to almost feel as if I were dancing with her. Nice job with that. Is this a narrative poem?

The rhyme was unintensional but after the first to lines already had the rhyme i decided to run with it. =) thanks for the comments ^.

Gorgeous! Definitely deserves the win. Congratulations!

awesome!

Thank you!