You don’t need to end every line with punctuation.. tone down on that and this could be perfect. I love it.

oh the sting! I feel it.

I dig it— utterly and completely cool, Abbey. I especially liked this part Below

Today I returned,
To rocks well climbed.
Where the stone scratches when before,
It would kiss me. Now it is,
Crueller.

But don’t get me wrong, it is very well written in its entirety. I see a whole lot of good literary stuff at use here, such as alliteration, and delivery, your phonetic delivery is flawless in the stanza that ends with, “Rougher.”