i was just having a fight with one of my friends and they were saying things like i was devoid of emotion and that i could not feel anything..ets.etc. well i was beginning to think that maybe it was true, till i read this. I love this poem it really said alot of what i was feeling.

sounds like someone needs a Midol®

Seriously, I really liked this.

@Krulltar, if that was at me, my friend doesnt need a midol as much as a nap. sleep its free and they always have more.

Beautiful. I don’t think I can say much else.

really, the ending kinda bugged me, yeah it was positive, but there it messes up the flow to stop there, but i left it because the awkwardness adds to the feeling of being off..

Ouch, what a sad poem, not just that the lost but that it left such a hole and such an apparent inability to find more joy. Lovely poem all the same.