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Rape is any act of sexual intercourse that is forced upon a person.

That’s what they say.

But of course, it isn’t true.

Rape is when someone takes away your power, your identity, your free-will, and shows you that it doesn’t matter how hard you try, or what choices you make, or what you sacrifice, you cannot control your own fate.

Someone can walk into your life and rip away everything that ever meant anything to you, and you can’t stop them.

It’s surprising how much of that we don’t understand. I mean, we say shit like “Life isn’t fair” and “Some things are beyond our control” but we don’t really beleive it.

Of course life’s fair! Of course I can control everything! I can be anything I want to be, do anything I want to!

But that’s bullshit, isn’t it?

The door opens, and I cover my eyes against the blinding light. I whimper and try to cover my naked body with the grimy sheets, still smelling of stale sweat.

“Hey girl, you ready to play?”

Oh yeah, but the sex stuff?

They do that too.

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  1. Avatar Over the Precipice of the Unknown; Into the Frontier of Uncertainty

    LMFAO, this is awesome in a sick and twisted sort of way. Just what I figured someone might do with the premise. I like your beginning and end, very well done…but there are so many unexplored options too!

  2. Avatar smdasilva {LoA}

    You captured the hopelessness of the MC very well. It is sad that we have these sorts of people in our society.

  3. Avatar ElshaHawk (LoA)

    You are so right about the loss of free will being rape when it is taken from you, not given willingly. Good point.

  4. Avatar Mr.Gabriel

    Wow. This was a great story to come back to this site too. Very nicely written, I could feel her rawness and the tension in he words. Awesome story.

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