More a matter of format than anything else, but it’s always easier to read with an extra carriage return between paragraphs.

Otherwise, interesting scene. I’d like to know more about these characters.

spoiled. And all that to buy a knife! Hope she doesn’t spear him in the back with it..

I agree with Elsha. This girl is very spoiled. But the boy seems like a good friend. I just hope it doesn’t bite him in the ass later on.

I agree with Elsha. This girl is very spoiled. But the boy seems like a good friend. I just hope it doesn’t bite him in the ass later on.

I find the protagonist hugely unlikeable, but Jem is a real, uh, gem.