Ooh, nice time travel twist there. I didn’t totally see it coming, but I’m a bit tired today. Nicely described moment too.

oh, i get it! back to kill himself! nice twist!

Arg… time travel and the included paradoxes make my brain hurt. But, that doesn’t keep this from being intriguing. I particularly liked the sparce-ish style, I’m not a huge fan of it but it works very well here.