When you said ‘tunnel’, my claustrophobia kicked in.. especially a dark tunnel with no discernible end.

But even though the dimensions sound pretty tight, the story kept the fear at bay.

’Cos I want to know about Memories and who the Bag Man was, and where this tunnel leads.

Which is all good.

I really like the descriptions of the tunnel, but even more than that am intrigued by the memories left like bread crumbs.

nah put them in some rice, they’ll be fine! lol
so the tunnel is in a bog, how alien! I love that you keep surprising us with not only new action, but new sensory details.

I love the details in this – I can almost smell the dirt. Fantastic!