Bennington Sky

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The sky never got black in Bennington; after sunset it darkened from cyan… cerulean… a gorgeous indigo reminiscent of her mother’s favorite scarf. As the night progressed it went further through the spectrum… saphire… Prussian… midnight. It complimented his cornflower eyes and hypnotized those still awake. Once it finally darkened, a deep denim blanket with splatters of stars, they went on a ghost tour around the old mansion. He pointed out portraits sheathed in a layer of steel dust — letting off an eerie glow. They finished in front of the hutch of handblown glass, periwinkle goblets arranged in rows that glittered. It still wasn’t enough of her for him and he asked her to stay out longer, maybe go for a walk. He guided her to places she’d never seen. Places where the moon’s rays painted the scene with cobalt kisses, where ultramarine pools could be home to fairies and night nymphs.

They walked for miles that night, dropping breadcrumb-pieces of their lives on trails that crossed campus.

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  1. Avatar S. Zee

    Ooooh, “cobalt kisses.” I like that!

  2. Avatar Nancy

    thank you!

  3. Avatar Vail Indigo

    I didn’t know how I felt about this challenge, but you made it work (I’m particularly fond of blues, so)

  4. Avatar April Raines

    Excellent use of the many words for blue! Cobalt kisses and ultramarine pools are especially nice.

  5. Avatar Nancy

    Thank you, everyone! This was so much fun… and brought me back to a fun challenge my writing club did. I think I might do one sequel and four prequels to hit all the base colors… I’m not even going to attempt white and black at this point. Thanks for putting out such an awesome challenge!

  6. Avatar OrangeOreos (LoA)

    I’m amazed at your ability to think of so many different blues! mind boggled

    The imagery was amazing, too!

  7. Avatar Nancy

    Wikipedia is my friend ;o)

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