nice ending of a romance novel.

It is pretty good yeah, but I feel that the last sentence doesn’t belong. Nowhere before that do we get any sense of them being in or near the water. How did her dress end up in the sea? Are they standing in the surf, or did the dress get blown by the wind or tossed off a balcony?

I understand the limitations we accept on Ficly. Perhaps this needs a prequel…

@DoItForScience its only part of the story so I couldn’t explain where they were – or why. But a prequel is a good idea!