I really like the sort of broken-up style of this piece; sort of a “life flashing before your eyes” sort of thing.

I dug this story. It was crying out for a prequel, so now it has one!

Live fast, die young attitude actually ended up with a far more sinister ending than just death… Really evocative with some great imagery – a moral tale as well as a good read in it’s own right… MH :)

Nice work, my friend! Deep stuff.

wow, that ending, so there is a terrible way to live forever.. trapped so that it feels like forever.