I hope that man is talking crazy.

One mistake though, you switched from who’s talking.

“Yes gramps?” the character asks, then his grandpa continues. This may confuse future readers.

hahahahahahahahaha! love it! bet he doesn’t want to be involved in the family business…
too funny..
this goes with my old lady writing on the wall..

Thanks for the input guys.

Mr G, that was intentional, but I sort of see what you mean so I re-worded it a bit

There really was no need to apologise for this, it’s a really interesting take on the challenge, I love how you’ve addressed the original saying as well, by looking at where that money comes from…

Good work, thanks for entering! MH :)

This made me smile. I would agree that shit makes the world go round, but it’s more the metaphorical kind than the literal kind. See: politics.