I like this. A third and fourth character at the same time and place. I can see this turning into a very cool vantage point piece.

If we choose that road we now we need the perspective from his girlfriend and the celebrity, while introducing even more characters.

Chapter One at least looks like it is going to take the vantage point direction, as per one of the challenge’s suggestions I think.

Still, it’ll work as long as some pivotal event or plot device is introduced at some point – there needs to be something linking the characters other than just a cube…

Still, good work Gabe, well done on constructing a nice little jigsaw piece that slots perfectly with the first – MH :)

Yay! It’s actually started! I’m so happy! Thank you both of you for posting!

now let’s get a sequel going. Who’s up for it?

That’s what I’m saying Grad.

And no problem, Jenni, I’m glad to participate.