Squirrels are evil, zombie or not.

Ridiculous and joyfully action packed. You’ve got a weird sentence there in the first paragraph that seems like a comma should be a period or something. And I’m assuming ‘skunn’ should be ‘skull’.
Still, jolly good zombie animal fun!

It’s essential in a story like this that, somehow, the writer communicates through their work that they’re having fun with their work – that they’re not taking it all too seriously…

You have that factor to a tee.

Really enjoyable read, and that ’there’s another one’ cliffhanger could fast turn into a running gag!

Well done – MH :)

This was a very enjoyable story to read and I can tell you had as much fun writing it as we did reading it. plus let me commend you the statistic of eleven stories and forty comments that is a nice ratio. You are definately LOA material.