Creative and kind of gripping.

Whoa, that was definitely a change from the norm! Like N. Robertson said, this is a creative piece; however, I found it a little confusing, as it isn’t the type I usually read.

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A nice twist on the challenge. It’s not easy to avoid a conversation in a dialogue only challenge.

Not completely sure of what you said (probably doesn’t help that I’m half-asleep), but I definitely like the way you said it.

2 words came to mind when I read this … charlie foxtrot