Nice twist in the last line there. Very nice.

Very interesting.

So, the floods are actually controlled, but still cause death and destruction.

I’m left wondering what role Jorin plays in that, and how long it’s going to be before he rebels…

Match this was an exceptional piece. Must have a finger in the dyke eh?

Nobody can know that the rich elite actually control the dam… It would cause rebellion and rioting the likes of which the town has never seen…

Sweet sequel!

A great character building piece! Makes me want to know more about the town politics and architecture!

ah so this explains his nonchalance in the first piece! well built sequel, adding much ‘depth’ *snicker..pun intended.. to the character.