This is lovely. It creates such vivid images, with a mellow, haunting tone. I really want to where this (friend?) went, what took them away.

Wow. Beautiful. I really like this piece. Well…I love the majority of your writing! You have an amazing gift

This is beautiful. The imagery it creates and the emotion in it is amazing. I love this piece.

beautiful, sentimental, and I think I like this one better than the other carnival one you did!

I had a carnival thing going on that day, didn’t I?

What a wonderful image. It represents so much about friendship and loss. Nicely done.