ooooh, creepy and grudge holding. The color of your words would go from dark blue to the the deepest darkest blackness available if I were to paint this poem. Gold frame.

Last two sections… gripping. Visceral and graphic. Agree with Winslow about the impact of the colors.

Words with a vengeance…you can taste the hatred. Very chilly or boiling over the brim, I can’t decide which. Well executed.