Wow… very different from the story that is saved, but unfinished, on my computer. Love what you did with it! Now I think I have to add either a prequel or a sequel to yours.

YAY! :) I couldn’t help thinking that there was just a little darkness there and I wanted to follow it a bit

Definitely has a dark twist to it that could become oh so much more if continued. I’d love to read more!

I think you are gonna find I like to take things off-track

Off track is a good thing… can’t wait to see how this progresses.

I like where this is going.