hmm, darkness, cold metal, raspy breath, is the person wearing clothes? Sounds like waking up in the morgue!

Well that sounds scary. Hope he’s neither claustrophobic nor afraid of the dark, the name for which eludes me at the moment.

THX- Looked it up just for the heck of it. It probably eluded because there’s like 5 of them: Nyctophobia, Lygophobia, Achluophobia, Myctophobia, or Scotophobia.

Yep, I’m a nerd. That or a time-waster. Probably a combination of the two.

Hmm sounds a lot like my room… Very good beginning. Kinda sounds like the beginning of a movie when the screen is still black, and all you can hear is, well the breathing of the character.

You r quite the talented writer here! Well done!